Anger burned inside of
him as he searched for a parking spot.
This hadn’t happened in the 1,765 days that he’d been following this routine. This better not cost him his chance to see
her, because if it did, Officer Patrick O’Neil would never forget today. He crumpled the paper in his hand and tossed
it onto the passenger’s seat.
An old woman opening a
car door a couple of blocks down caught his attention and he slowed down to
give her a chance to get in her car and pull out. Her movements were beyond slow and he wanted
to scream at her to bust a move, but he must keep an outward appearance of
calm.
His gaze flicked to his
watch. Eleven fifty-two. By now he should have been in his spot so he
could watch her approach. He needed to
hurry, damn it, and that old woman was taking her old sweet time.
He felt the anger
growing inside. Finally, she pulled out
of the spot and slowly made her way down the street. He hurriedly parked and after locking the
car, set off to reach his vantage point before she arrived.
It took him nearly five
minutes to reach the spot where he normally parked. Being a creature of habit, he needed to
follow his routine down to a T. He
stopped by the driver’s side door of the ford pickup parked in his usual spot,
his mind automatically noting the number on the license plate. From here, he moved across the road to the
trail that led to the small cemetery. As
he moved, he mentally ticked off his routine.
Three hundred and twenty-nine steps, turn to the left and walk nine
steps, then a slight right and go down ninety-one steps till he reached the
bottom of the hill.
The bench where he
normally sat was just across the clearing, thirty-one steps to get there, but
he got no further than fourteen steps when a middle-aged woman sat down on his
bench. Fists clenched, he debated
whether or not to join her, but matters were taken out of his hands as a
teenage boy sat down.
Once again his gaze went
to his watch. Twelve thirteen. He wanted to scream in frustration. Instead, he turned one hundred and eighty
degrees to see that she was already standing at the grave. He’d missed it. There was no way to know if today was the day
that she was finally ready to move on, or if he would need to wait some more
before approaching her.
His gaze went to the
woman on the bench as he let himself listen in on the conversation she was
having with the boy. She was telling him
about his father, Gavin Shehorn, and how he was a war veteran. His fists clenched as he envisioned wrapping
his hands around her throat and squeezing the life from her. Too bad he couldn’t vent his frustration in
that way.
Turning back, his eyes
glowed as he watched her. He felt himself stirring as he watched her
every move, hoping to catch anything he might have missed by not being here
before she arrived.
She looked nearly the
same as the first time he’d seen her over fifteen years ago. He remembered that night as if it were
yesterday.
She’d smelled lightly of
flowers, her black hair so dark it had shown blue in the moonlight as it flowed
down past her buttocks. When he’d
touched her copper colored skin he’d gotten hard, electricity giving him a high
he’d never been able to recreate since.
When he’d forced her down onto the ground and taken her, he’d felt alive
for the first time in his life, and no matter how many times he’d tried to
recreate that feeling, it had never happened again.
That’s when he knew that
it had to be her. She was the only one
for him and it was imperative that he have her.
A smile graced his face.
Movement caught his eye
and he tensed as a man approached her.
The man was familiar, build similar to his own but slightly more
muscular. When he placed his hand at the
small of her back, rage boiled inside him.
Damien wanted to rush over and tear the man from her.
She turned her face up
to the man and smiled.
He leaned down to kiss
her lightly on the lips, then his lips moved, as if he were saying something to
her.
Her head tilted a little
more and she laughed.
Damien’s eyes narrowed as he focused on her,
willing her to push him away. Didn’t she
realize that he was all wrong for her? He was the one that she was destined to
be with. His foot moved forward against
his will. Forcing himself to stop
because he wasn’t ready for a confrontation, he willed the man to turn so he
could see his face.
She stilled, her head
lifting a fraction of an inch more as she turned, looking in all directions. When she was looking in Damien’s direction,
her eyes widen as if she recognized him.
He knew that was impossible, after all, he’d worn a ski mask and it was
dark. There was no way she could know
that he was the one who had taken her innocence that night.
The man’s mouth was
moving once again as if he were saying something to her, once again.
She answered him and he
finally turned so that his face was visible.
Shock ran through Damien
as he looked at a face that was a familiar to him as his own. The man raised his hand and waved. Returning the wave, Damien moved toward
them. There was no other way.
Damien watched as her
gaze moved between them, a puzzled look on her face. She shuddered as she drew closer to him.
For the first time in thirty-nine years, he wanted to act on the
impulses he’d had many times over the years to drain the life from him.
His gaze moved to
her.
Her downcast eyes seem reluctant
to look at him.
Damien forces a smile. “So, this is why you haven’t been around
much.”
He grins. “Can you blame me?”
The feel of electricity coursing
through his body from being so close to her has him shivering with excitement. It’s stronger than the last time which puzzles
him, unless it’s because of the anticipation causing it to spike. He’d read where that could happen in some
cases.
Damien offered his hand,
but instead of taking it, she wiped her hands on her jeans as she stepped even
closer to him.
He pulled her to him as
he rested his chin on the top of her head.
“This is my twin brother, Damien.
I’ve told you about him.”
She nodded. “Yeah, I remember.” Her eyes dart in Damien’s direction but she
still won’t meet his gaze. “Nice to meet
you.”
She’s lying. He can sense it. He stares at her intensely and she starts to fidget.
A plan starts to form
and his eyes become hooded so that Dante won’t be able to read his
thoughts. Not that he really believes
one person can read another’s thoughts, but Dante is spooky like that. When they were children, his brother would
often spoil his fun by changing circumstances so that Damien wouldn’t have the
opportunities he’d tried to engineer.
Acting on his plan, he
grinned before lifting his hand once again.
“I need to get going.” He
motioned to the woman and young man seated on the bench in the distance. “I just came with some friends to pay my
respects. I’ll catch up with you later
and maybe we can do lunch.”
Dante nodded. “Sounds good.”
Damien held his hand out
and the two shook hands before he turned to make his way back over to the bench. Stopping just in front of the two seated
there, he held his hand out once more, smiling to put them at ease. “Hello.
My name is Dante Falcon. I
couldn’t help overhearing earlier that your son was a war hero. I just wanted to tell you, I’m sorry for your
loss.”
The woman smiled sadly
and nodded her head. “Thank you. It’s been a long time, but to me it was like
it happened yesterday.”
Damien leaned down and
kissed her cheek.
Oddly, the woman put a
hand to her throat and her eyes narrowed on him. She stood and hurried away, dragging the boy
with her.
One corner of Damien’s
mouth crooked into a smile and his eyes seemed to glow an unnatural color for a
moment before they returned to normal. He
slowly made his way after the two departing figures. As he followed them, he started whistling an
odd tune.
The woman picked up her
pace as if the tune upset her in some way.
Each time her pace
picked up, Damien’s smile grew and his eyes gleamed brighter.
Damien reached his car
first and as he got in, the woman seemed to visibly relax. After fastening the seatbelt and starting the
car, his gaze moved to the rearview mirror.
He took note of her license plate before pulling out and driving away.
As he moved through the
city, he started making a mental list of all the things that he would need to
pull this off. He didn’t need to write
anything down, that was the benefit of having a photographic memory. By the time he’d reached his home, he had a
handle on just what his plan would entail.
He pressed the garage remote as he turned into his drive and then made
sure the door was closed once he was parked.
Damien stopped at the
bathroom off the kitchen as he entered the house. His gaze went to the mirror over the
sink. His black hair was shoulder length
and at the moment it was tied back in a ponytail. His blue eyes seemed energized which he put
down to anticipation of carrying out his plan.
Knowing he would have her soon made his blood heat with desire.
He knew he was a
handsome man. The evidence in the mirror
told him that, and it was reinforced by the fact that women were always
throwing themselves at him. He didn’t
see them, though. No ordinary woman
could ever measure up to her.
His mind went back to
his twenty-fourth birthday. He’d gone
out with his wilder friends and they’d gotten high. That’s when Miller had gotten the idea to
grab some girls and have a party. They’d
gone out as a group, but as each one of them had chosen, the group had dwindled
until finally he was the only one still out there looking.
He’d been ready to call
it a night when he’d seen her. His heart
had stuttered as he’d fallen into line behind her. She’d kept looking behind her and each time
he’d blended in with a tree or some shrubbery until she was too far away from
anything for her calls of help to be heard.
He’d quickened his pace,
and when she’d started running, he was in a position to trip her. He was on her in seconds. She’d been no match for his superior
strength, and after he’d taken her, he’d quickly tied her up and gagged her. When he’d lifted her in a fireman’s carry,
he’d started whistling. She’d tried to
struggle, but there would be no getting free for her.
He’d taken her to his
special place and that’s where he’d kept her for the better part of a
month. No one missed him because they’d
thought he was on vacation. A quick call
and his trip had been canceled. His eyes
closed as he remembered how excited he’d felt to be inside her each time her
took her.
His gaze went to the
mirror. Soon… I’m coming for you soon, love.
egad, what a nasty piece of work he is. Poor girl is in for some super trouble. well done
ReplyDeleteYes, this is only the beginning, and I haven't even gotten to his plan yet.
DeleteHe scares me already!
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DeleteLOL!
wonderfully creepy and scary! You create wonderful images and scenes with your writing.
ReplyDeleteYou have a verb tense shift briefly in the middle of the story:
''She’s lying. He can sense it. He stares at her intensely and she starts to fidget. etc...''
Also: use of -ing verbs: writing will be stronger if you avoid use of -ing verbs [or so the common grammar thinking is]. You can do a highlight search for ING then try rewriting in a different way.
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I debated on that one when I did the read through. Yes, you've found my weakness. I'm the only person I know who can start a sentence in the present and then go to the past and on to the future before I reach the end of the sentence. Thank you for the heads up and I'll keep that in mind. Thank you very much.
DeleteI do understand, I ve found myself doing it when I ve reread my oldest fanfics. It works when you re the writer and the character;s' feelings seem to be in your head and very immediate. But to a reader it is jarring and spoils the contiuity of the scene. [I believe]
ReplyDeleteThank you for all of your input.
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