Wednesday, May 28, 2014

May 28th, Making Christmas Memories

     Today's prompt is to write a story tied to a holiday that takes place in November/December/January/February.  No retelling of Scrooge or many of the other noted themes popular at this time of the year either.  Although A Christmas Carol does make it into my story, it's only because that's one of the memories of Christmas for one of the characters.  This is a very rough draft and I hope that you can make your way through the errors to enjoy the story.  This is an excerpt that I will be working on for a possibly longer piece.


     Jenny Grayson loved going into the city at this time of the year.  It brought back all kinds of memories from the days when she was a little girl and would accompany her mother on the two hour trip.  Today was special, though, the first Saturday of December.  Today was the first time she’d been able to make the trip since her eighteenth birthday, which was also the last time her mother had made the trip.
     Ten years had passed since that day when they’d traveled—from their rural farming community into the big city of Chicago—on a greyhound charter bus to spend the day Christmas shopping and to see the play, A Christmas Carol.  They both loved that play so very much and each Christmas season when they made the journey, it was like seeing it for the first time all over again.
     Jessica, her mother, said that Scrooge reminded her of Jenny’s dad, James.  He’d been very much like Scrooge himself when they’d first met.  Jenny loved hearing the stories her mother told about the romance with her father.  She could just picture the fireworks her mother talked about as she’d told her about the animosity between the two of them when they’d first met.
     She was brought back to the present by the sound of a big bus pulling into the parking lot.  She carefully got out of her Grand Am, grabbing the backpack from the passenger seat then locking the car before limping over to stand in line with the others getting picked up at this location.  There were about twenty people, mostly mothers and daughters, but there were a couple of guys making the trip as well.
     Knowing she would need extra time to get on the bus due to her injury, Jenny made sure to stay at the end of the line.  When she’d made the trip arrangements, she’d let them know about the special provisions she would need.  The woman had assured her that wouldn’t be a problem.
      Stepping onto the bus, she felt the excitement mounting.  Sure enough, there was a sign on the third seat behind the driver that said reserved.  She lifted the sign and sank down in the window seat before arranging her injured leg on the seat beside her. 
     She felt eyes on her as she did this and looked up at the most amazing pair of whiskey colored eyes.  The imp attached to the eyes smiled up at her and Jenny felt an answering smile come to her own lips. 
     A rough baritone intruded into the silence to say, “Sit in your seat Tori, we’re going to start moving.”
     The little person in front of me wrinkled up her nose and sighed.  Without turning to the speaker, she said, “Okay, Daddy.”
     Jenny leaned back against her seat back and closed her eyes, smiling as she heard the little girl’s grumbles that her activities had been curtailed.
     Although she pretended to sleep, she never reached that magic zone.  Still, she had lots of practice in keeping herself still.  It had been a life-saving skill she’d needed over the years.  The only clue that she wasn’t actually sleeping was the smile she couldn’t erase from her face as she listened to the father and daughter duo behind her.
     “Daddy, are we there yet?”
     “Not yet, Tori.”
     “How soon will we get there?”
     “About another hour.”
     Sigh…  There was silence for several beats and then, “Daddy?”
     “What, baby?”
     “Are we there yet?”
     A deep chuckle sounded giving me a warm squishy feeling inside.  This father hadn’t once answered the many beeps alerting him that he had a message, and not once had he let impatience into his tone when he spoke to Tori.  He had many of the same characteristics of Jenny’s own father.
     She must have fallen asleep because the change in speed and the rockier motions as the bus started making more turns woke her.  Her eyes opened and she sat still for several moments while she waited to acclimatize to her surroundings.
     The driver was speaking and she finally registered what he was telling them.  They could either get off at the first stop here by Macy’s or they could continue on to the Clock Tower and get off there, but everyone would need to meet back to this location. 
     Tori was bouncing on her seat.  “We’re here, Daddy!  We’re here!”
     His voice sounded amused as he told her, “Yes, we’re here.  Now, what was it we were going to do first?”
     A giggle sounded before the little girl said, “Oh, Daddy!  You know we’re going to see Santa at Macy’s.”
     A deep chuckle answered the child and Jenny felt an electrical current race down the back of my neck.  She’d never been affected like that before and wasn’t sure she liked the feeling. 
     Standing so she would have a chance to get the circulation flowing again to all the necessary places, she waited while the people from the back of the bus disembarked. 
     Tori went to rush past her when she was brought to a halt by a gentle hand. 
     “Where are your manners, young lady?  You need to wait for this lady to get off first.”
     Jenny felt the heat to her cheeks and smiled, “Oh, no, please go first.  It will take me a bit longer to get off and I don’t want to hold you up.”
     The man looked down at the child, his only direction was a raised eyebrow.
     Tori turned to her and rolling her eyes, she smiled sweetly, displaying the dimples in her cheeks as she said, “We don’t mind waiting.”
     Jenny looked up at the father and time stood still.  She shook herself as she gave herself a mental lecture on ogling other women’s husbands as she carefully stepped out into the aisle and slowly made her way to the front.  She let out a sigh when she felt solid ground under her and turned to thank the father and daughter duo. 
     Tori frowned at Jenny’s leg before lifting her eyes to meet Jenny’s.  “How are you going to walk around town?”
     Jenny smiled gently as she said, “I’m not going to be doing much walking.  I’m just going over to the Christkindlmarket when it opens.”
     The child’s eyes lit up as she turned to her father.  “Oh, Daddy, I’ve always wanted to go and see that.  Can we?  Can we please?”
     Drake Keller felt the hitch in his heart as he looked at the young woman his five-year-old daughter had taken a liking to.  Her tawny brown hair flowed around her shoulders and she had the most beautiful blue eyes he’d ever seen.  He’d love nothing more than to spend their day with the person standing in front of him, but figured she wouldn’t want to be stuck with a widower and his precocious five year old daughter.
     Just as he was ready to give her an out, she reached out and touched Tori’s blond curls.  “I’d love for you to join me, but don’t you and your daddy have other plans for the day?  I’m sure I heard you say you were going to see Santa.”
     Tori hesitated for a second then said, “You can come with us to see Santa first and then we can go with you to the village.”
     Jenny hesitated before asking, “What about your wife?”
     Tori piped up, “Daddy doesn’t have a wife.  My mommy’s in heaven.  That’s why we are getting two pictures today.  One for us to take home, and one for Santa to take to Mommy in heaven.”
     Tears blurred Jenny’s eyes and she had to catch her breath.  She looked up at Drake.  “I’m so sorry.  I didn’t know.”
      He nodded.  “She died the day Victoria was born.  Five years ago Christmas Day.”
     “You must have loved her a great deal.”
     Drake placed a hand on Tori’s head as he said, “She gave me a very precious Christmas gift that year.  So each year we come into Chicago and get a picture of Tori with Santa.”
     Jenny smiled.  “That’s a wonderful thing you are doing.”
     He shrugged.  “We usually get the pictures done first and then get a meal before taking in one of the plays.  You’re welcome to join us if you’d like.”
    She smiled.  “I’d like that.  I used to come here with my mother when I was little.  She used the excuse that we were going into the city to Christmas shop, but like you, we always stopped in to see Santa and get a picture.  Then we would spend a while walking around the market before making our way to the theatre so we could watch A Christmas Carol.  It was our favorite.”
     Drake smiled as he held out his hand.  “Shall we?”
     Jenny placed her hand in his and allowed him to pull her along with them as they headed across the street to Macy’s.  She felt the twinges in her leg as they crossed the road, it always seemed to act up whenever she tried to hurry.
     After the first several steps, Drake slowed to match Jenny’s pace rather than let her continue trying to move at his faster pace.  When she looked up at him, he winked at her and they continued into the store and up the escalator to the toy department where Santa was on his throne giving court.
     It only took fifteen minutes for Tori to reach Santa and within seconds she had her picture taken and was racing back to her father. 
     The woman in the elf costume handed Drake both of the pictures that he’d purchased.  He took them and handed one of them to Tori who ran back to where Santa sat and handed it to him.  He nodded solemnly and put the photo inside his suit.  As Tori ran back to her father once more, Santa put two fingers to his temple and saluted Drake. 
      As they made their way through Macy’s, Jenny was glad to have Drake at her side to ward off the crowd.  It was nearly wall to wall people.  Tori held tightly to her father’s hand as well.  When they reached the main floor, the smell of perfume permeated the air and Jenny was glad the moment the stepped outside onto the sidewalk because she was finally able to get a breath of fresh air.
     They headed a couple of blocks over to where the Christkindlmarket was set up.  The smell of teas, beer, hot cocoa, hot cider, brats, potato pancakes, sauerkraut, Currywust, Leberkäse, assorted roasted nuts, gingerbread, German cookies, and an assortment of German chocolates and candy, Stollen, popcorn, and cotton candy as well as fresh and savory strudels and puffs as well as Schnitzel, chicken sandwiches, German burgers, and ghoulash soup all blended into an incredible aroma and Jenny felt he stomach rumbling telling her it was lunch time.
     They stopped and Drake bought them each a sausage and cider along with some roasted nuts and a German cookie to share.  As they ate, they walked around the village looking at the artwork that each of the vendors had on display. 
     Jenny stopped to admire the cuckoo clocks.  She remembered her mother standing and watching them for quite a long time. 
     Drake leaned in to ask, “Are you thinking of buying one?  You can have it shipped to your home if you’d like.”
     Jenny shook her head.  “No.  I was just remembering how much my mother loved standing and looking at them.”
     “Which one do you think she would like?”
     A soft laugh escaped as Jenny pointed to an intricately designed model.  “No question, that one.  She loved ballerinas.”
     “Why don’t you get it for her?”
     Jenny looked up at Drake.  “She was killed in a car accident two weeks before Christmas ten years ago.  I was in the Marines and we were stationed overseas.  I wasn’t able to make it home until after the funeral.”
     “I’m sorry.”
     Tears pooled in Jenny’s eyes.  “That’s okay.  She loved life and believed every day should be celebrated.  That’s why I’m here.  I’m making the trip for both of us this year.  It’s the first time I’ve been able to do this since her death.”
     “What about your father?”
     “He still lives in the house he built for my mother before they married.”
      Drake’s arm went around her shoulders and she leaned her head against him.  They stood like that for a minute or two more until they were jostled from behind by the mob of bodies all trying to make their way through the market.  As the allowed the crowd to move them along, they took in the rest of the sights, Christmas ornaments, colorful clothing, wood carvings, among other things.  All in all, it took them nearly ninety minutes to get find their way to the sidewalk at the exit.
     Drake checked his watch as they stopped outside the crowd looking to make their way into the market.  “If we are going to see A Christmas Carol, we need to go now.  It will be starting in a few minutes.”
     The three of them headed to the theatre just a couple blocks down and when Drake paid for all three tickets, Jenny protested but she was over-ruled.  Drake placed a finger over her lips and said, “Let me.  Please.”
     She nodded and was pleasantly surprised when they took their seats in the front row. 
     The way Tori’s young face beamed at the action on the stage and her eyes seemed to glimmer with the wonder of what was going on around her gave Jenny more pleasure than she’d ever had before.  She remembered her mother watching her much in the same way she was watching Tori.  As Scrooge was redeemed, she smiled and looked up above her, smiling as she whispered, “This was the best one yet, Mom.  Thanks for coming.”
     Once the show was over, Drake ushered them outside to where a horse-drawn carriage was waiting.  He helped Tori and Jenny inside before taking his own seat and directing the driver where to take them.  They had just enough time for a short ride before they were dropped off where the bus was loading. 
     They waited for all of the others to get on, taking their seats as the driver prepared to head home.  Drake put Tori in the window seat and reclined her seat before taking his own seat beside her.  “Why don’t you recline your seat so that we can talk on the way back?  Unless you’d rather sleep.”

     Jenny did as he suggested and had the best time of her life talking to the man that had made today special for her in so many ways.









No comments:

Post a Comment