Friday, May 30, 2014

May 30th, Area 215

     Today's prompt was a simple one.  Since there are two hundred fifteen days left in the year, we were to write a story around two hundred fifteen.  This is what came from that.  The following is an excerpt from a work in progress.  The characters and plot belong to me.


     Two hundred fifteen.  That was the magic number.  That was always the magic number whenever Frank set up one of these mysteries.  Now all she had to do was figure out just what that number referred to in regards to this particular mystery.  If she got it right, then she would get out of this damn hellhole in the middle of nowhere, get it wrong and she would have to wait two hundred and fifteen days till the next mystery.  The biggest problem was that she wasn’t the only one trying to figure out the mystery.  No, it couldn’t be that easy.  There were two hundred fifteen other prisoners here all trying to solve the case as well.
     There were rules they had to follow as well, two hundred fifteen of them to be exact.  Everything about this mystery revolved around that number.  There were two hundred fifteen clues, they had two hundred fifteen minutes to solve the case, and somehow, the number two hundred fifteen was the key to solving the whole thing.
     This was the third time that she would take part in the game.  She’d come close the last two times, but someone had beaten her to the answer.  This time, she had a plan.  She was going to leave the phone she had been given on the bed in her room.  Once she had her answers, then she would input the data, starting with the answer to the mystery first.  She would be hindered because she wouldn’t get the same clues as the others, but on the plus side, no one would know how close she was to the answer.
     She checked her phone to see it was two thirteen in the afternoon.  She had two more minutes until the call would come with the information they would need to solve the case.  She took a deep breath and readied herself. 
     Two fifteen p.m., the phone rang and she pressed the button to connect the call.  A mechanical voice spoke, “It is very early Monday morning, two young girls go down to the kitchen to find their mother lying dead on the kitchen floor.  They call the police and learn there is a car in the area that has been dispatched.  When the police arrive, they talk to the girls and then arrange for a family member to come and pick them up.  The girl’s father arrives.  He’s very disheveled and seems out of sorts.  He takes the girls to his mansion where he and his new wife are living and tells the girls to make themselves at home.  After making sure the girls were settling in, the father goes back up to his bedroom where his wife is sleeping.  He falls into an exhausted sleep for the next two hours and fifteen minutes.  When he wakes up he remembers nothing about picking up his daughters or his first wife’s murder.  He goes off to work as if it’s any other day.  When the police arrive at his office, he’s totally confused as to what happened.  The father is arrested for the murder and the daughters are placed with his wife’s sister.  You must find out who is really responsible for the murder as well as what the motive was and how the murder was committed.”
     Siri tossed the phone on the bed.  She wouldn’t need it again until the end.  She was desperate to get out of here and knew what she must do to make that happen.  She faced the mirror and took in her appearance.  Her curly brown hair was tamed as best she possibly could, she wore a blue T-shirt and faded blue jeans with her favorite dirty white sneakers.  She took the necklace she always wore out and clasped the amulet as her eyes closed. 
     A kaleidoscope of colors exploded in her mind as she felt herself moving through the air.  She was rusty at this because she hadn’t done this since her ninth birthday.  She regretted now breaking the promise to her mother, but she was desperate to get out of here and this seemed the only way.  She evened her breathing and let herself see what it was she needed to know. 
     Siri watched as the scene played out like a movie.  She saw the girls go to bed and the mother answer the door to let in her lover.  There was a look of disbelief as a woman joined them.  After a moment she glared and demanded, “What are you doing here, Vanessa?”
     The blonde woman smirked, “I wanted to see who my brother was sleeping with these days.”  She looked at the blond Adonis at her side and let out a forced laugh before saying, “You always did like slumming it.”  She turned back to her husband’s ex-wife.  “You’re a fool for thinking my brother wants you for anything but sex.”  She brought up a gun and aimed it at her.  “You need to go away so I can get at all that nice money.  Two hundred fifteen million dollars… and it’s all going to be mine.”  She gave a sly smile and then said, “Just as soon as I get rid of my husband and those daughters of yours.”
     The two got the victim into the kitchen where Vanessa killed her.  Siri followed them as they left, listening to all of the information she needed to know.  Once she had everything, she made the journey back, floating down into her own body as the kaleidoscope of colors merged into a brilliant blue.  She opened her eyes and went to the phone where she pressed the number that would connect her to the voice.
     When the call was answered, she said, “Two hundred fifteen seconds is the time it takes to solve the case.”
     The mechanical voice spoke, “Continue, winner.”

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