Saturday, May 24, 2014

May 24th, Good Vibrations

     Today's prompt was to write a story title Good Vibrations, using the Beach Boys song title to write a story of our own.  The following is an excerpt from an original work in progress.  The characters and plot belong to me.

     Taryn crested the mountain she’d been climbing for the past three days.  Nowadays, there were easier ways to reach her destination, but as her college professor—Allen Smart—had once said, “Sometimes, in doing things the easy way, you miss out on the important information you would have gathered in getting there.”  Although the professor was mediocre at best, he had rare insights that she’d found infinitely useful, such as this one.
     Scanning the area, she headed in the direction she always made for and after a good ten minutes, she came upon the makeshift camp she’d set up five years ago when she’d first started doing this.  Everything was as she’d left it on her last visit and from the vibrations around her, she knew that no one had been here to disturb anything.
     Setting down her pack, she made her way to AVIDD.  Airway Vibration Inhibitor Detecting Device.  A few quick strokes of the keys and the machine was up and running. 
     She loved watching AVIDD come to life.  If he were a real man, he would be perfect.  A smile graced her beautiful face at the thought.  At nineteen, Taryn stood no more than five foot in height.  It was a condition that all of the half-breeds were born with.  The same with the white-blond hair and vibrant green eyes.  No one knew why this was, they only knew that it was.
     She closed her eyes and lifted her face to the sky.
     She hadn’t been alive for the war, but everything that had happened during that time was inside of her.  Just as the knowledge of where her mother’s people came from and why they had come to Earth twenty years ago.  She was the gatekeeper.  That’s why she was here.  To monitor the vibrations of the universe so that she could make sure Earth was never again targeted without prior warning as it had been the last time.
     Her eyes closed as she let the currents in the air around her tell her more than what the machine was capable of.  Oh, it did the job she’d programmed it for, but there were more nuances in the air that only a true Telarian could pick up. 
     She took a deep breath and held her arms out to her sides, palms up to the sky as the wind gently blew her hair in the air.  She didn’t need to open her eyes to know what was going on, instead, all she had to do was to look within and the scene was there for her to watch.  AVIDD started vibrating, causing her to frown.  With her eidetic memory, she knew every nuance of the machines last scan.  Although it wasn’t off by much, it was enough to sound a warning inside her telling her that danger neared.  What form that danger would take was at yet unknown.  But soon the answers would become all too obvious.  She just needed to find those answers before the danger arrived.
     Taryn opened her eyes and for a moment, there was a shimmering vision in front of her showing a great mass in the sky shooting fire down toward a helpless planet.  She followed the beam firing back to the mass and she was given a view of a command center.  Sitting in the chair at the center of the command center was the most handsome man she’d ever seen. 
     Suddenly, he stilled and his eyes swerved to capture her gaze.  She felt the heat from his gaze as he studied her, her heart beating at nearly triple speed as her breathing quickened.  She felt her lips part as his gaze zeroed in on her mouth and the desire she felt inside was something she’d never been exposed to.  Her gaze lifted to meet his head on and the tilt of his smile as he smirked at her told her that she was in trouble.  She severed the connection and hurried to AVIDD.  She adjusted the controls so that the machine would continue to send her data, then she grabbed her pack and hurried to where her tether line was grounded. 
     She had to get back fast.  Martel would be waiting for her at the base of the mountain and she had to tell him there were no good vibrations this time, only impending danger.  He would know what to do and who they needed to contact. 

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